Since the forum is going to be streamlined and about half of all members will be kicked out for lacking of writing. I was thinking of maybe helping those out who wish they could hone their writing skills or unblock their minds and allow their thoughts to project onto the forum pages.
There are a handful of occasional writers that probably would write a little more often if they felt they could express themselves through the written word. Also there are a shit load of non Anglophone readers out there who probably think that if they wrote in another language their posts would go unnoticed. Which we all know isn't true. But that's another issue altogether.
Getting it down on paper (so to speak).
The first thing is that you are writing about what you actually experienced. Its not as if you have to make up the scenario and create characters and so forth. Keep in mind the order of events to begin. There is a beginning to all stories, a middle, the climax of the story. In this case its literally a climax! Then you have an ending.
When preparing to write your review treat it as if you were telling someone a story. Any event that actually happened to you. You went to a hockey game for instance how would you tell your friend? Its pretty much that easy. Let's say you decided to go to the bar Saturday night and Monday morning at work you tell a co-worker about your night out. Think about what possible question he or she may ask while you recount your night out. This will help ensure that you've thought about all the little details while telling your story or in this case writing your review. And the questions could be anything you might want to know if someone was telling you the story.
Be a little introspective as well. Not only think about what you're writing about, but feel it. This will allow you to include certain details that would have escaped you if you writing in point form or without any concern for the reader (as many writers do on this forum and then we see a ton of requests for more details).
Getting Started... Ask yourself why you went to the MP. Was it because you work nearby? Was it because you happen on the place. Is it because you read their ad on this forum or found them on the net? Or is it because you read a good review and now its on your "to do" list? Don't just say you were hornier than a bear in the woods... that's obvious. But you could say you've been out of the loop for a long time and finally needed to be with a woman. This is the reason why you're so goddamn horny.
Now your at the MP. How did you get there? By bus, taxi, metro or you drove there. Was it easy to find? Was the parking good or bad? These little details can be helpful for other members when deciding to visit a MP. How did you find the entrance? Was it clean, dirty, was too obvious or discreet enough. Was it hard to find? These details will also help other members from stumbling around a neighborhood looking for the damn place and also allow them to know what to expect.
You enter the place. Did it take long for someone to open the door and you found yourself standing outside for too long? Did you enter easily? Is there a reception area with receptionist? Who greeted you? How where you greeted? What did you pay for an entrance fee? Did you have an appointment? Was the girl you booked available? Di you go in without an appointment? Where allowed to get a line up and choose a girl or did you get a girl on rotation? Also what was your first impression of the MP when you entered? How did it look? Was it clean, well decorated, did it smell of boiled chicken, etc? All important details in allowing new clients to learn from your experience.
You're shown to your room. Did you have to wait before getting a room? Was the MP busy? Was the room in order? Was the room clean, dirty, smelly, cold, hot, ugly, plain, again your first impressions are key. The shower worked well, was it clean, was their sufficient pressure, or hot water, was there soap? How are the towels? Was the music any good, the lighting too bright? All silly details but important.
The Masseuse enters the room. Did you settle for whatever was available and she wasn't really your type but what the hell, you don't care? Was she who you booked and you can't wait for the massage to begin? Is the girl pretty? Ugly? Fat? Skinny? Describe her as much as possible, but at the same time be fair about it. I wouldn't suggest saying she was the "butt ugliest bitch you ever saw" because then anyone would ask why you stayed. Beyond her description how was her personality, her attitude, her massage skills, etc. What you liked or didn't like about the over all first half of your hour is important.
The Flip. This is where you have to limit your details and come up with some subliminal expressions or simply say she rocked your world in more ways than one. I used to write volumes of emotions and minute details but never mentioning one act of sex. A little like the song "Something" by The Beatles. Where its obvious George Harrison is in love but never once sings the word "love". This is completely unnecessary. Most readers have about 5 to 30 minutes to skim through reviews at work, so keep the flip to the basic info and include a surmise. This is the climax of the story. This where you might want to say that she was great, or she did a lousy job. This is where you'll tell the reader whether or not you want to see the girl again or not based on the flip.
The final shower and your over all experience. Some girls will enter the shower with the client. Some girls will not ask for money. Some girls will clean the room while you shower. Some girls will stick around and chat with you. There is always some sort of ending to the session. Sometimes its good to include a final detail like you were walked to the door by the masseuse or the receptionist. You were given a bottle of water and a pat on the ass as you left. Or you were forgotten in the room after the deed. You stayed an extra 30 minutes talking to your wife/boss using your cell phone and took a dump in the fake flower pot and used the old shower towel to wipe your ass. Then emptied all the candies on the reception desk into your pockets as you left leaving the door to the place wide open.
There is always something to write about even if the place has been reviewed or the girl has been reviewed. Not every detail has to be mentioned every time you write a review. But keep these little details in mind. It adds character to your story, even the building is a character and adds or takes away from your experience. How you were received, how the massage went, how the flip was and it all ended are all important factors in writing a review. If a girl or salon has been reviewed often then you could simplify the entire experience into a short paragraph that your experience was similar except... Always keep in mind the reader when writing.
Finally. Go over what you've written. Correct any spelling/ grammar/ or add missing words. Also you might have thought of something while re-reading your own review and may want to add it in or remove something. Another good reason for re-reading your post is maybe you've added too much info that might incriminate you or might give you and your handle away. So keep it as general as possible without it looking like a generic posting.
This is a basic and quick recount of what I'm doing when writing a review. If any one has other tricks or thoughts on the subject please feel free to add your thoughts here and help the community write more often with more details to get better idea of what their experiences are like.
Kojak... hoping this will spawn more writers
There are a handful of occasional writers that probably would write a little more often if they felt they could express themselves through the written word. Also there are a shit load of non Anglophone readers out there who probably think that if they wrote in another language their posts would go unnoticed. Which we all know isn't true. But that's another issue altogether.
Getting it down on paper (so to speak).
The first thing is that you are writing about what you actually experienced. Its not as if you have to make up the scenario and create characters and so forth. Keep in mind the order of events to begin. There is a beginning to all stories, a middle, the climax of the story. In this case its literally a climax! Then you have an ending.
When preparing to write your review treat it as if you were telling someone a story. Any event that actually happened to you. You went to a hockey game for instance how would you tell your friend? Its pretty much that easy. Let's say you decided to go to the bar Saturday night and Monday morning at work you tell a co-worker about your night out. Think about what possible question he or she may ask while you recount your night out. This will help ensure that you've thought about all the little details while telling your story or in this case writing your review. And the questions could be anything you might want to know if someone was telling you the story.
Be a little introspective as well. Not only think about what you're writing about, but feel it. This will allow you to include certain details that would have escaped you if you writing in point form or without any concern for the reader (as many writers do on this forum and then we see a ton of requests for more details).
Getting Started... Ask yourself why you went to the MP. Was it because you work nearby? Was it because you happen on the place. Is it because you read their ad on this forum or found them on the net? Or is it because you read a good review and now its on your "to do" list? Don't just say you were hornier than a bear in the woods... that's obvious. But you could say you've been out of the loop for a long time and finally needed to be with a woman. This is the reason why you're so goddamn horny.
Now your at the MP. How did you get there? By bus, taxi, metro or you drove there. Was it easy to find? Was the parking good or bad? These little details can be helpful for other members when deciding to visit a MP. How did you find the entrance? Was it clean, dirty, was too obvious or discreet enough. Was it hard to find? These details will also help other members from stumbling around a neighborhood looking for the damn place and also allow them to know what to expect.
You enter the place. Did it take long for someone to open the door and you found yourself standing outside for too long? Did you enter easily? Is there a reception area with receptionist? Who greeted you? How where you greeted? What did you pay for an entrance fee? Did you have an appointment? Was the girl you booked available? Di you go in without an appointment? Where allowed to get a line up and choose a girl or did you get a girl on rotation? Also what was your first impression of the MP when you entered? How did it look? Was it clean, well decorated, did it smell of boiled chicken, etc? All important details in allowing new clients to learn from your experience.
You're shown to your room. Did you have to wait before getting a room? Was the MP busy? Was the room in order? Was the room clean, dirty, smelly, cold, hot, ugly, plain, again your first impressions are key. The shower worked well, was it clean, was their sufficient pressure, or hot water, was there soap? How are the towels? Was the music any good, the lighting too bright? All silly details but important.
The Masseuse enters the room. Did you settle for whatever was available and she wasn't really your type but what the hell, you don't care? Was she who you booked and you can't wait for the massage to begin? Is the girl pretty? Ugly? Fat? Skinny? Describe her as much as possible, but at the same time be fair about it. I wouldn't suggest saying she was the "butt ugliest bitch you ever saw" because then anyone would ask why you stayed. Beyond her description how was her personality, her attitude, her massage skills, etc. What you liked or didn't like about the over all first half of your hour is important.
The Flip. This is where you have to limit your details and come up with some subliminal expressions or simply say she rocked your world in more ways than one. I used to write volumes of emotions and minute details but never mentioning one act of sex. A little like the song "Something" by The Beatles. Where its obvious George Harrison is in love but never once sings the word "love". This is completely unnecessary. Most readers have about 5 to 30 minutes to skim through reviews at work, so keep the flip to the basic info and include a surmise. This is the climax of the story. This where you might want to say that she was great, or she did a lousy job. This is where you'll tell the reader whether or not you want to see the girl again or not based on the flip.
The final shower and your over all experience. Some girls will enter the shower with the client. Some girls will not ask for money. Some girls will clean the room while you shower. Some girls will stick around and chat with you. There is always some sort of ending to the session. Sometimes its good to include a final detail like you were walked to the door by the masseuse or the receptionist. You were given a bottle of water and a pat on the ass as you left. Or you were forgotten in the room after the deed. You stayed an extra 30 minutes talking to your wife/boss using your cell phone and took a dump in the fake flower pot and used the old shower towel to wipe your ass. Then emptied all the candies on the reception desk into your pockets as you left leaving the door to the place wide open.
There is always something to write about even if the place has been reviewed or the girl has been reviewed. Not every detail has to be mentioned every time you write a review. But keep these little details in mind. It adds character to your story, even the building is a character and adds or takes away from your experience. How you were received, how the massage went, how the flip was and it all ended are all important factors in writing a review. If a girl or salon has been reviewed often then you could simplify the entire experience into a short paragraph that your experience was similar except... Always keep in mind the reader when writing.
Finally. Go over what you've written. Correct any spelling/ grammar/ or add missing words. Also you might have thought of something while re-reading your own review and may want to add it in or remove something. Another good reason for re-reading your post is maybe you've added too much info that might incriminate you or might give you and your handle away. So keep it as general as possible without it looking like a generic posting.
This is a basic and quick recount of what I'm doing when writing a review. If any one has other tricks or thoughts on the subject please feel free to add your thoughts here and help the community write more often with more details to get better idea of what their experiences are like.
Kojak... hoping this will spawn more writers
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